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Uroczyalezajety Posted 12 years ago
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Could somebody check my writing? :D

I'm writing to you to tell you my news. I'm on holiday abroad.
I've spent my holiday in Montpellier for three weeks. When I arrived, I felt amazed and very confused because I had never been there and I was alone. I hired a log cabin only for me with seafront.
When I got up at 7 a.m. I always saw a little fishing boats at sea. From other window i had more "beautiful" sight. There was the big rubbish dump. As soon as I saw it, I understood why the rent wasn't high.
Advantage of living in this place is everything is nearly ex. the bus station, the restaurant, the theather, the cinema and the beach. Inhabitents are very friendly and the city had a rich history.
I want to live in big city or metropolis. I love cities which is live all day and all night.
That's all for now. I hope to hear from you soon.
Hugs and kisses.
  

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uroczyalezajety I'm writing to you to tell you my news. I've spent three weeks in Montpellier. When I arrived, I felt amazed and very confused because I had never been there and I was alone.

  • uroczyalezajety I'm writing to you to tell you my news.
  • I've spent three weeks in Montpellier.
  • When I arrived, I felt amazed and very confused because I had never been there and I was alone.
  • I hired a log cabin only for me overlooking sea.
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uroczyalezajety I'm writing to you to tell you my news. I'm on a vacation abroad.I've spent three weeks in Montpellier. When I arrived, I felt amazed and very confused because I had never been there and I was alone. I hired a log cabin only for me overlooking se

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