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Uroczyalezajety Posted 12 years ago
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Hi everyone! Why don't you join us?
I belong to Ruch Obrony Praw Dziecka. It is a company which respects human rights, especially children rights. I am a member of organisation, because I would like to force children into begging. The children right are break when ex. they have to work, they are beaten, they can't express their views.
I think that, the organisations like Ruch Obrony Praw Dziecka are very important and helpful for children. They can live without stress and fear. They are human too and they should have rights everywhere.
So, each one ought to belong the Ruch Obrony Praw Dziecka. If you want to join me and my friends, go to the website of organisation. An information about it are on the Facebook to.
So, don't hesitate to contact us!
  

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I belong to Ruch Obrony Praw Dziecka. It is an organization company ( a company is a for-profit organization which has some business selling things or services) which advocates respects human rights, especially children ' s rights. I am a member of this organisation, because I would like to force children into begging.

  • I belong to Ruch Obrony Praw Dziecka.
  • It is an organization company ( a company is a for-profit organization which has some business selling things or services) which advocates respects human rights, especially children ' s rights.
  • I am a member of this organisation, because I would like to force children into begging.
  • ( Do you really want all children to beg for money?
  • ) The children 's right are violated break when ex.
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I belong to Ruch Obrony Praw Dziecka. It is an organization company ( a company is a for-profit organization which has some business selling things or services) which advocates respects human rights, especially children's rights. I am a member of this organisation, because I would like to force children into begging. (Do you really want a
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