Could smb pleasecorrect me or give some suggestions on my motivation letter

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00 I am writing to apply for the Bachelor Program in Economics and Management.02br
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00My name is XXXX. I was born in 00XXX,00 in a town with 100 000 inhabitants. It lies in the north-west part of XXXX. 00XXXX00 is well-known for being a trade and industry regional centre.02br
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00 00 00I finished my elementary school in my home town and high school "00XXXXXXXXXi00" in the capital of 0100Serbia0200, 00 with excellent grades. Also, following the suggestion of the curriculum council of my high school, I studied two grades in one school year achieving excellent marks.02br
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00 After the final examination I decided to improve my English and to prepare as well as possible for University. Till now, I have taken a 3-week course in "XXXXXXXX" 00 of 00 in the 0100United States0200 and "XXXXXX" in 00 from September00 200600 and I am still attending that course.02br
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00 I decided to apply for 00 because I consider it as one of the leading Universities in the field of economic science, which I need for my future business. Therefore, 00studying00 at 00XXXXXX 00would be an important pillar in my career plans. My family owns a company, called XXXXXX, which is one of the most successful companies in 010200, so I 00would like00 to enlarge my knowledge and to contribute to the development and progress of our company. Likewise, to free my parents of too much obligation and to repay them for the nice life and love that they have given me.02br
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00 In my city there is a big deficit with educational cadre, owing to the reason that young experts are leaving the country or moving to the bigger 00cities. Therefore00, I am hoping that an education at 00 would allow me to 00become00 irreplaceable in our company as well as to help all employees in education. Working together with students from all over the world as well as from all other nations will also give me possibility to enhance my understanding of foreign cultures as well as different viewpoints and attitudes.02br
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00 During my primary and secondary school I did karate and achieved great results.00 00I am a holder of a black belt and recipient of many medals. As a part of a national team for over six years,00 traveling00 to foreign countries I have broaden my experience and sociable skills.02br
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00 Italian culture has always fascinated me, beginning with the ancient culture of the 00Etruscans00, across the unavoidable Roman Empire, Renaissance epoch and the heroic combat for uniting 00 and liberation of Austrian occupation.02br
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00 Undoubtedly, besides art and history I adore first of all Italian cuisine. I often visited my sister and brother in 00 where they have studied.02br
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00 00Moreover, living in 010200 I would became capable of learning Italian, and of good 00socializing00 of the similar temperament of our two nations.02br
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00 For all of these reasons above and my qualities, I am certain that I have chosen the appropriate university and convinced that I could greatly contribute to its student body and the University itself. As a very 00ambitious00 person, with a willingness to learn, I will do my best to satisfy your expectations. I would therefore be very pleased to be accepted as a student at 00.02br
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00 I look forward to your positive response.02br
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00 00Yours faithfully,02br
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00 00Foreigner0-