Could please you mark my IELTS task 2 writing

Topic: Learning English in a foreign country is the best but not the only option. How far do you agree? Write about 350 words

Although English is not the most spoken language in the world, it has, however, undoubtedly been the most popular means of communicating between people. Therefore, there is a huge demand for English lessons and it has been stated that living in its native country is the best way to learn it. By looking at the chance it provides the speaker who lives in such country, I broadly agree with the statements but to deem other aspects of studying method albeit some drawbacks, it is clear that one doesn't necessarily travel abroad o improve their language.
As mentioned, studying overseas provide many monopoly advantages to improve one's communication skill. Let's first take a look at the atmosphere surrounded by speakers of English only, anyone has to speak that language to get their ideas across and by listening to many accents from all corners of the world they step by step develop a good listening aptitude. All these opportunities to improve the language has made traveling abroad the best way to learn it.
Nevertheless, education has many aspects and one can be the best way but not the only one. To be specific, those aspects are self-studying or joining some groups with like-minded people to name but a few. Using the former way not only save us a big sum of money but also make the learners academically professional in the field of its system. Moreover, one can find the activity of joining speaking groups benevolent to them. Students do not need to travel but can immerse themselves into an English-spoken environment. If exploited wisely, anyone can significantly turn themselves into a proficiency or at least an advanced users of English.
On the other side of the problem, there are many setbacks of the later view if not taken with seriousness. That is the moment when someone has formed the habit of making such mistakes, it would be hard to change their mind. And finally, all the method of learning will eventually ineffective unless a regular regime is taken for the sake of improvement.
To sum up, it is common knowledge that putting a learner in an English-speaking country will do them good while some may argue that it is the best but not the monopoly. Frankly enough, no methods are effective without the companion of daily brush-up.