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We request your kind approval on the applicationsame for the further extension of visit visa for a month to the following persons. Since they are on visit visa, we have requested for residence permit last week to look after his kids as no one after them but meanwhile their visit visa has been expired. In oder to stay leagally and to obtain residence permit, we need your kind approval on this visa extension request.
  

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We request your kind approval of the application to extend the visit visas for a month for the following persons. (List names here - eg. ) Since they were here on temporary visit visas which were expiring, and needed to stay longer to care for their children, we requested a residence permit a week ago.

  • We request your kind approval of the application to extend the visit visas for a month for the following persons.
  • (List names here - eg.
  • ) Since they were here on temporary visit visas which were expiring, and needed to stay longer to care for their children, we requested a residence permit a week ago.
  • Since then, their visit visas have expired, so, for them to remain here legally, we need your kind approval on this visa extension request.
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We request your kind approval of the application to extend the visit visas for a month for the following persons. (List names here - eg. Abdul Aziz, Mohammad Ashur, etc.) Since they were here on temporary visit visas which were expiring, and needed to stay longer to care for their children, we requested a residence permit a week ago. Since then, their visit visas have expired, so, for the

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