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Mubrik88 Posted 17 years ago
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Could please check this reply?Man vs. Wild or Survivorman.
These television programs are about surviving in the wild, with little or no food ,fresh water, or even shelter, and it's up to the survival expert to use his skills to find it.
From my point of view Survivorman show is better because the situation is real, and there are no camera crew to help him if he was in danger, and of course he had to operates all the cameras himself .
You can watch theses television programs in discovery channel or download it from the internet.
What about you, Which show do you like better?
These television programs are about surviving in the wild, with little or no food ,fresh water, or even shelter, and it's up to the survival expert to use his skills to find it.
From my point of view Survivorman show is better because the situation is real, and there are no camera crew to help him if he was in danger, and of course he had to operates all the cameras himself .
You can watch theses television programs in discovery channel or download it from the internet.
What about you, Which show do you like better?
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Good opening sentence, but I would cut it in half. Example: These television programs are about surviving in the wild with little or no food, fresh water, or even shelter. (notice that a comma is not necessary after the word wild).
- Good opening sentence, but I would cut it in half.
- Example: These television programs are about surviving in the wild with little or no food, fresh water, or even shelter.
- (notice that a comma is not necessary after the word wild).
- It's up to the survival expert to use his skills to find these things.
- " Sentence two: From my point of view, (comma needed here, this is an introductory clause) Survivorman is a better show because the situation is real, and there IS no camera crew to help him if he IS in danger.
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Good opening sentence, but I would cut it in half. Example: These television programs are about surviving in the wild with little or no food, fresh water, or even shelter. (notice that a comma is not necessary after the word wild). It's up to the survival expert to use his skills to find these things. (to find "it" indicates one item, and since survivorman is looking for more than one thing, we
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