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Exodus74 Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Could one help me how to express this properly?

Self-sufficiency is when you sufficient yourself. It is not imply that you should live alone and abscond from others.
Being a self-sufficient implies that you able to provide for oneself without the help of others.
This implies that you can afford to go to the movies or a walk alone and you are not bored you sufficient yourself for company.

If you are able to make an independent decision, not based on someone's opinion if you are responsible for yourself and you enough yourself to understand what should be done properly.
If a person is self-sufficient, he respects other people's opinions, but adheres to his opinion.
Self-sufficient person never grieve and he cannot be aggrieved - he has faith in himself and he has respects himself.
Self-sufficient people are not anxious about the past and not anxious about the future.

It's just essential quality of life. You must be able to do everything and to intend to work things out yourself and to depend on nobody.
You should remain alert to the possibility that if all men ever abandon you and even no one to help you, and you must begin to make decisions yourself. And will need to find the strength only in yourself to live.
Self-sufficiency is a very good quality of life. Self-sufficient person knows his own worth, and it is easier to achieve goals. After all self-sufficient people always what to do. If you always get bored when you are alone it does not speak in favor of you.
This is one of the main qualities that I emphasise in people. It includes many components. Here and independence of anyone's opinion was, and self-confidence and inner strength, and a clear view of the world, not cloudy prejudice and fear of misunderstanding.
The ability to not lose heart, never give up, do not take failure to heart and treat life as a game. No extra emotion, without despair. When nothing and no one need for harmony with yourself and the world and good humor, and the absence of someone close does not inspire feeling inferior. When wondering to yourself, when you know what you want and determine what really matters to you.
God is completely self-sufficient. After all, he created us in His own image and likeness, He gave us free will. A man may believe in Him, or may not believe in Him God determines our purpose but we determine our destiny.
God is the Supreme Being. There is nothing and nobody above Him. God is self-sufficient. He always has been and will be - He is timeless, He exists, who has life in Himself, He does not need air and food, He does not need water and space.
  

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Hi; I have highlighted places in your first few sentences where there are mistakes that need to be fixed. If you try to fix these, I will help you some more. Self-sufficiency is when you sufficient yourself.

  • Hi; I have highlighted places in your first few sentences where there are mistakes that need to be fixed.
  • If you try to fix these, I will help you some more.
  • Self-sufficiency is when you sufficient yourself.
  • It is not imply that you should live alone and abscond from others.
  • Being a self-sufficient implies that you able to provide for oneself without the help of others.
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Hi;

I have highlighted places in your first few sentences where there are mistakes that need to be fixed. If you try to fix these, I will help you some more.

Self-sufficiency is when you sufficient yourself. It is not imply that you should live alone and
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Self-sufficiency is when you are sufficient yourself. It doesn't imply that you should live alone and to abscond from others. Being the self-sufficient implies that you are
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Self-sufficiency is when you are sufficient can take care of yourself financially and emotionally. It doesn't imply that you should live alone and to abscond withdraw from others. Being a
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You switch in your essay between second person (you) and third person (he, she). It is best to be consistent throughout. Here are some suggestions for the next paragraphs, but I'll bet you, bu being self-sufficient, can improve the rest of the essay by yourself.
This is a good essay!
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A self-sufficient person does not take offense at anyone and he cannot be aggrieved - he has faith in himself and he respects himself.

This is one of the main qualities that I value in people. It includes many components. This is independence
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It may be better
This is independence from opinion others, and confidence and inner strength, and a clear view of the world isn't benighted prejudices of fear and misunderstanding.
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This is independence from opinion others, and
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This is independence from opinion of others, and confidence and inner strength, and a clear view of the world without deeply
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Is it correct?

Self-sufficiency is the ability to not get depressed, doesn’t give up, doesn’t take failure to heart and treat life as a game. Without extra emotion and despair. When no thing and no one don’t need you for achieve harmony with yourself. . This is where the lack of someone close to you does not inspire feeling inferior. When you are interested yourself, when you know what yo
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thank you so much so much so much!!! it really helped me!!!!!

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