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Alc24 Posted 15 years ago
Grammar
Could native speaker help me make sentences natural?
Could you please help me correct these sentences please?
1 90 dollar shoes for my kids is expensive considering They're going to destroy them in a week.
2 You've never seen commission like this before./You've never seen commission this big before. I made 30,000 dollars in commission this month.
3 If the tap's water pressure can't get any higher stronger, at the rate, it'll take you 10 minutes to fill the bucket of water.
4 I'd rather work less and make less with the possibility of working more (overtime) if I ever wanted to than work lots of hours and make more money.
Thank you so much
1 90 dollar shoes for my kids is expensive considering They're going to destroy them in a week.
2 You've never seen commission like this before./You've never seen commission this big before. I made 30,000 dollars in commission this month.
3 If the tap's water pressure can't get any higher stronger, at the rate, it'll take you 10 minutes to fill the bucket of water.
4 I'd rather work less and make less with the possibility of working more (overtime) if I ever wanted to than work lots of hours and make more money.
Thank you so much
Top answer
I have underlined some problem areas. 1 90 dollar shoes for my kids is expensive considering They're going to destroy them in a week. /You've never seen commission this big before.
- I have underlined some problem areas.
- 1 90 dollar shoes for my kids is expensive considering They're going to destroy them in a week.
- /You've never seen commission this big before.
- I made 30,000 dollars in commission this month.
- 3 If the tap's water pressure can't get any higher stronger, at the ra te, it 'll take you 10 minutes to fill the bucket of water.
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I have underlined some problem areas.
1 90 dollar shoes for my kids is expensive considering They're going to destroy them in a week.
2 You've never seen commission like this before./You've never seen commission this big before. I made 30,000 dollars in commission this month.
3 If the tap's water pressure can't get any higher stronger,
1 90 dollar shoes for my kids is expensive considering They're going to destroy them in a week.
2 You've never seen commission like this before./You've never seen commission this big before. I made 30,000 dollars in commission this month.
3 If the tap's water pressure can't get any higher stronger,
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I've tried correcting them, but it doesn't tell me if they are stilted or how a native would say them naturally?
1 90 dollar shoes for my kids is expensive considering they're going to destroy them in a week.
2 You've never seen commission like this before./You've never seen commission this big before. I made 30,000 dollars in commission this month. (that's how commission is spel
1 90 dollar shoes for my kids is expensive considering they're going to destroy them in a week.
2 You've never seen commission like this before./You've never seen commission this big before. I made 30,000 dollars in commission this month. (that's how commission is spel
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Your sentences are too long. They involve a lot of ideas within them what makes it less coherent.
Try to shorten the sentences using correct punctuation. Don't attempt to think like a native speaker while you're not. Be yourself and write down what seems naturally to you. Just do it while dividing each idea into independence sentence.
I'll give you an example:
These shoe
Try to shorten the sentences using correct punctuation. Don't attempt to think like a native speaker while you're not. Be yourself and write down what seems naturally to you. Just do it while dividing each idea into independence sentence.
I'll give you an example:
These shoe
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