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Anonymous Posted 6 years ago
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Could I improve anything about this?

Hi teachers. Could I improve anything about this?


Scared, the hunter fell backwards. He scrambled back to his feet, and fumbled with his rifle. Before he could get it under control, the wolf charged at him.

  

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You did pretty well. I made a little correction or two. Scared, the hunter fell backwards.

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  • You did pretty well.
  • I made a little correction or two.
  • Scared, the hunter fell backwards.
  • He scrambled to his feet and fumbled with his rifle.
  • Before he could get it under control, the wolf charged at him.
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You did pretty well. I made a little correction or two.


Scared, the hunter fell backwards. He scrambled to his feet and fumbled with his rifle. Before he could get it under control, the wolf charged at him.

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