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Park sang joon Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Could I ask you for checking short sentences

I have written the follow sentences; could I ask you for checking these.

Was writing I wrote to you odd?
What was odd?
Couldn't I understand!
Yes, If you had frankly said so, I would not have been mad at you and suspected you.
So why did you lie?
  

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Was writing I wrote to you odd? -- Not right. Grammatically it could be fixed by putting "the" before "writing", but "the writing I wrote" is still awkward and repetitious.

  • Was writing I wrote to you odd?
  • -- Not right.
  • Grammatically it could be fixed by putting "the" before "writing", but "the writing I wrote" is still awkward and repetitious.
  • " or "Was the note/letter/etc.
  • " What was odd?
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Was writing I wrote to you odd? -- Not right. Grammatically it could be fixed by putting "the" before "writing", but "the writing I wrote" is still awkward and repetitious. You can say "Was my writing odd?" or "Was the note/letter/etc. (that) I wrote to you odd?"

What was odd? -- OK.

Couldn't I understand! -- No. I can't really tell what you mean, unless it i
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Yes, if you had frankly said so, I would not have been angry at you and suspected you.
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sameer666Yes, if you had frankly said so, I would not have been angry at you and suspected you.
"be mad at someone" is a common informal expression. It would not be appropriate in formal English though. Maybe that is what you are pointing out.
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Yes, it depends on context. Though by the post it seems like a dialog, so can be informal I suppose.
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Thank you Mr.GPY for your correction and opnion about my text. <smile>

"Couldn't I understand! -- No. I can't really tell what you mean, unless it is simply I couldn't understand!"
In exclamatory sentence, couldn't we invert the subject and verb?
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park sang joon"Couldn't I understand! -- No. I can't really tell what you mean, unless it is simply I couldn't understand!"In exclamatory sentence, couldn't we invert the subject and verb?
Sometimes it is possible.

"Am I sick of this!"
"Could I use a cold beer!"

This type of inversion has a particular stylistic feel. It does not work in e
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Sorry, somehow I overlooked the negative examples like:

"Isn't it lovely!"
"Wasn't it fun!"
"Haven't you grown!"
etc.

These are pretty standard and common. Sometimes they can be ambiguous between a question and an exclamation.
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Thank you Mr.GPY very much for your concrete accounts.

"Isn't it lovely!"
"Wasn't it fun!"
"Haven't you grown!"

In those sentences negative and exclamatory forms are used for stressing positive expression. Am I right?
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park sang joonIn those sentences negative and exclamatory forms are used for stressing positive expression. Am I right?
Right.
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Thank you Mr.GPY for your answer.

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