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Park sang joon Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Could I ask for validation for an email

I have written the following sentences, and I'd like to know whether or not these are correct.

It looks like some problems have occurred for the packages sent between 7.15 and 21.
All the people in my club have not yet received the packages sent then.
Could you look into the problem?
For reference, The packages sent after 7.25 have already arrived.

In advance, thank you for your help.
  

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15 and 21 . Are these dates? If so, make them clear ...

  • 15 and 21 .
  • Are these dates?
  • If so, make them clear ...
  • between 15 and 21 July.
  • None of the the people in my club have not yet received the packages sent then between those dates yet .
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It looks like some problems have occurred with the packages sent between 7.15 and 21. Are these dates? If so, make them clear ...between 15 and 21 July.

None of the the people in my club have not yet received the packages sent then between those dates yet.
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Thank you Mr.fivejedjon for your correction.

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