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Piplot Posted 13 years ago
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The Northern lights of Norway
One thing that has really changed my life happened when I travelled and arrived in Norway. I decided to do this trip because I always dreamed seeing the aurora borealis. Perhaps It look as a story invented but was a dream came true. First of All, I'm from Peru so Norway isn't the nearest place. It took hours to arrive there. In norway I could see the incredible wildlife that exist there, It is a land near the coast and there is snow everywhere that you can see.
From Norway to arrive at the place where you can see the amazing northern lights, you have to travel on special skis which are carried by lots of dogs on the snow.
You arrive at night because It is far away site and there, You just have to be patient and you will look at the sky, that amazing show will start!
My dream has already been realised because I didn't surrender! Good luck on you journey.
Yuri
The Northern lights of Norway
One thing that has really changed my life happened when I travelled and arrived in Norway. I decided to do this trip because I always dreamed seeing the aurora borealis. Perhaps It look as a story invented but was a dream came true. First of All, I'm from Peru so Norway isn't the nearest place. It took hours to arrive there. In norway I could see the incredible wildlife that exist there, It is a land near the coast and there is snow everywhere that you can see.
From Norway to arrive at the place where you can see the amazing northern lights, you have to travel on special skis which are carried by lots of dogs on the snow.
You arrive at night because It is far away site and there, You just have to be patient and you will look at the sky, that amazing show will start!
My dream has already been realised because I didn't surrender! Good luck on you journey.
Yuri
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The Northern Lights of Norway One thing that really changed my life happened when I travelled and arrived in Norway. I decided to do this trip because I always dreamed of seeing the aurora borealis. Perhaps it seems like an invented story but it was a dream came true.
- The Northern Lights of Norway One thing that really changed my life happened when I travelled and arrived in Norway.
- I decided to do this trip because I always dreamed of seeing the aurora borealis.
- Perhaps it seems like an invented story but it was a dream came true.
- First of all, I'm from Peru so Norway isn't the nearest place.
- It took hours to arrive there.
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The Northern Lights of Norway
One thing that really changed my life happened when I travelled and arrived in Norway. I decided to do this trip because I always dreamed of seeing the aurora borealis. Perhaps it seems like an invented story but it was a dream came true. First of all, I'm from Peru so Norway isn't the nearest place. It took hours to arrive there. In Norway, I could see the i
One thing that really changed my life happened when I travelled and arrived in Norway. I decided to do this trip because I always dreamed of seeing the aurora borealis. Perhaps it seems like an invented story but it was a dream came true. First of all, I'm from Peru so Norway isn't the nearest place. It took hours to arrive there. In Norway, I could see the i
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