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Mohammad Lardhi Posted 14 years ago
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Could anyone take a little time out to check my email message, please?
Dear Ms.
I am writing now to inform you that I have some extremely urgent family situation in my village, which is located in Yemen, so I think that I won't be able to attend the IELTS test I am a candidate for on 13 October. I am, thus, in a very awkward situation, which brings me to the reason for this e-mail. I am respectfully requesting that you consider the following option in regard to my difficulty: grant me a special exemption to shift the date time of my IELTS test to the date time of test which will be held on 08 November 2012.
I would greatly appreciate it if you could allow me to shift the date time of my test into the eighth of November 2012.
I look forward to receiving your response at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely,
I am writing now to inform you that I have some extremely urgent family situation in my village, which is located in Yemen, so I think that I won't be able to attend the IELTS test I am a candidate for on 13 October. I am, thus, in a very awkward situation, which brings me to the reason for this e-mail. I am respectfully requesting that you consider the following option in regard to my difficulty: grant me a special exemption to shift the date time of my IELTS test to the date time of test which will be held on 08 November 2012.
I would greatly appreciate it if you could allow me to shift the date time of my test into the eighth of November 2012.
I look forward to receiving your response at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely,
Top answer
Mostly, I have just removed some unnecessary verbiage. _ ____ , I am writing to inform you that I have some extremely urgent family business in my village in Yemen , so I don't think that I will be able to attend the IELTS test on 13 October . I am re spectfully requesting that you allow me to shift the date of my IELTS test to 8 November 2012.
- Mostly, I have just removed some unnecessary verbiage.
- _ ____ , I am writing to inform you that I have some extremely urgent family business in my village in Yemen , so I don't think that I will be able to attend the IELTS test on 13 October .
- I am re spectfully requesting that you allow me to shift the date of my IELTS test to 8 November 2012.
- I look forward to receiving your response at your earliest convenience.
- Yours sincerely,
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Mostly, I have just removed some unnecessary verbiage. This is all that is expected of such a letter:
Dear Ms._____ ,
I am writing to inform you that I have some extremely urgent family business in my village in Yemen, so I don't think that I will be able to attend the IELTS test on 13 October. I am respectfully requ
Dear Ms._____ ,
I am writing to inform you that I have some extremely urgent family business in my village in Yemen, so I don't think that I will be able to attend the IELTS test on 13 October. I am respectfully requ
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Mister MicawberMostly, I have just removed some unnecessary verbiage. This is all that is expected of such a letter:Dear Ms._____ ,I am writing to inform you that I have some extremely urgent family business in my village in Yemen, so I don't think that I will be able to attend the IELTS test on 13 October. I am respectfully requesting that you allow me to shift the date
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It was a poorly conceived lesson, then. You will either irritate your readers or put them to sleep.
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