Could anyone proofread this ?
This small article is about the current situation in J&K.
The abrogation of Article 370 has created a political chaos in the state. Some political leaders have been imprisoned in the jails fearing that they could stir up violence in the state and all those leaders seen slamming the government for this bold move are worried about nothing but themselves as the repealment of this article shuts down their shops of political dynasty as these political leaders have been governing this state for decades and see this move as a threat to their political dynamism.
Please do advise about the writing style and there is this one statement "as the repealment of this article shuts down their shops of political dynasty", I don't know whether this statement is correct or not but what I wanted to express by the statement is that these political leaders see this state as a business model and nothing else, so the word "shops" was meant in a bit harsh sense.
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The abrogation of Article 370 has created a political chaos in the state. Some political leaders have been imprisoned in the jails because other leaders fear fearing that they could stir up violence in the state and all those leaders seen slamming the government for this bold move are worried about nothing but themselves as the repealment of this article shuts down their shops of political dynasty as these political leaders have been governing this state for decades and see this move as a threat to their political dynamism. Please do advise about the writing style This article begins with a simple and short sentence that is very easy to understand.
- The abrogation of Article 370 has created a political chaos in the state.
- Some political leaders have been imprisoned in the jails because other leaders fear fearing that they could stir up violence in the state and all those leaders seen slamming the government for this bold move are worried about nothing but themselves as the repealment of this article shuts down their shops of political dynasty as these political leaders have been governing this state for decades and see this move as a threat to their political dynamism.
- Please do advise about the writing style This article begins with a simple and short sentence that is very easy to understand.
- But the rest of it is one long sentence that is very, very hard to understand.
- It would be easier for us to grasp your meaning if you rewrote this as several sentences.
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The abrogation of Article 370 has created a political chaos in the state. Some political leaders have been imprisoned in the jails because other leaders fear fearing that they could stir up violence in the state and all those leaders seen slamming the government for this bold move are worried about nothing but themselves as the repealment of this article shut
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