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Emib Posted 19 years ago
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Could anyone please mark this composition for me?

0 Could anyone please mark this composition for me? It's going to be marked by an American English teacher, i don't know whether that's is usefol for you or not. It doesn't need to be a formal or polite composition, it just needs to be right ^^:02br
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00Thank you so much, people 05001blockquote
01b10My physics teacher12b12br
10The best teacher I have ever had was a friendly and middle aged woman and her name was Blanca. She wanted to work for NASA in the US as an aerospace engineer, she liked everything connected to space, stars…, but she couldn’t and had to work at my high school.12br
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10Although she taught physics using a usual boring book, the lessons weren’t so boring as they used to be until she became my teacher because she told a lot of jokes about what we were studying.12br
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10I got high marks on physics because she explained really well and it was not necessary to study.12br
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10Unfortunately, nowadays I have another physics teacher, I wish Blanca were back.12br
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1b 00My Physics Teacher02b 02br 02br 00The best teacher I ever had was a friendly and middle aged woman, whose name was Ms. Blanca. 02br 02br 00Although she taught Physics using the same usual boring books, the lessons weren't as boring as they used to be, after she became my teacher.

  • 1b 00My Physics Teacher02b 02br 02br 00The best teacher I ever had was a friendly and middle aged woman, whose name was Ms.
  • Blanca.
  • 02br 02br 00Although she taught Physics using the same usual boring books, the lessons weren't as boring as they used to be, after she became my teacher.
  • This was in part due to her incorporating a lot of jokes about what we were studying in Physics.
  • 02br 02br 00Unfortunately, nowadays I have another Physics teacher.
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1b00My Physics Teacher02b02br
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00The best teacher I ever had was a friendly and middle aged woman, whose name was Ms. Blanca. She wanted to work for NASA in the US as an Aerospace engineer, as she liked topics about anything connected to space, the stars etc…, but she couldn’t find an appropriate opening and had to take up work at my high school.02br
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0Thank you very much 05001blockquote
00The best teacher I ever had was a friendly and middle aged woman12blockquote
10What's the difference between that tense and the one I wrote? I guess is an american-british difference (Americans use past simple and British both of them).01blockquote
00Blanca were back as she will be remembered by m

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