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Mohammad Lardhi Posted 14 years ago
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Could anyone please correct my mistakes in this E-mail message??
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing now to inquire about the schedule of the IELTS tests in AL-Khobar in Saudi Arabia. I have checked your website and found out after searching by city that the test dates were listed as the following:
On 1 september 2012/14 Shwal 1433 AH at British Council.
Also, on 6 September 2012/19 Shwal 1433 AH at IDP IELTS Test Centre.
However, when I have checked at your online registration website, I found that the test dates were different from the first search. The test dates were in order: The first date test date was on October, the second was October, the third was on November and the final was on December.
Also, I have spotted that the price of test is quite different from a country to another against the dollar. For instance, the price of a test in Yemen is 125 USD. However, is 226 USD, As a result, there is quite a great difference of a hundred and one American dollars which equals 378.75 SAR. Thus, as long as SAR equals about 60 YR, I would have saved approximately 101 USD which equals(378.75 SAR/13560 RY) if I have tested in Yemen.
In addition, I have found out that there are two test modules. The first was Academic and the other was general training. It would be quite good if you could let me know what difference there are between them to determine my level is suitable for which of them ? Are both of them acceptable for getting an admission letter at any university?
I look forward to receiving your response at your earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully,
I am writing now to inquire about the schedule of the IELTS tests in AL-Khobar in Saudi Arabia. I have checked your website and found out after searching by city that the test dates were listed as the following:
On 1 september 2012/14 Shwal 1433 AH at British Council.
Also, on 6 September 2012/19 Shwal 1433 AH at IDP IELTS Test Centre.
However, when I have checked at your online registration website, I found that the test dates were different from the first search. The test dates were in order: The first date test date was on October, the second was October, the third was on November and the final was on December.
Also, I have spotted that the price of test is quite different from a country to another against the dollar. For instance, the price of a test in Yemen is 125 USD. However, is 226 USD, As a result, there is quite a great difference of a hundred and one American dollars which equals 378.75 SAR. Thus, as long as SAR equals about 60 YR, I would have saved approximately 101 USD which equals(378.75 SAR/13560 RY) if I have tested in Yemen.
In addition, I have found out that there are two test modules. The first was Academic and the other was general training. It would be quite good if you could let me know what difference there are between them to determine my level is suitable for which of them ? Are both of them acceptable for getting an admission letter at any university?
I look forward to receiving your response at your earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully,
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I would be quite good if anyone could take some time out for correcting my message.
- I would be quite good if anyone could take some time out for correcting my message.
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I would be quite good if anyone could take some time out for correcting my message.
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Why did nobody reply me? I think because I am asking about the prices of your language which wastes our time and money without any benefit. I wouldn't have intended to study English at all if I had found any university accepting my language.
Because I quite know that there are too many organizations getting too many profits from the income of these exams. I personally quite disagree with
Because I quite know that there are too many organizations getting too many profits from the income of these exams. I personally quite disagree with
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