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Letter Writing
Could anyone please correct my CV???
Personal data
Name Marius Jann
Address Sonnenstr. 7a;
80995 Munich, Germany
Date of Birth 20 February 1986
Nationality German
E-mail Email Removed
Telephone 0043 680 2373935
Education history
Sep 2010- Oct 2011 Master in International Relations at IBEI Barcelona (7.7: notable)
Feb -Jul 2009 Erasmus at Sciences Po Paris
Feb 2007 Political sciences and Sinology at the "Universitaet Wien" (A-)
Jun 2006 "Abitur" at the "Gymnasium Fuerstenfeldbruck München"
Qualifications
"Abitur" with specialised courses in history and German (excellent performance)
Driver's license
Computer: Microsoft Word, Excel, Outlook, PowerPoint, Access
Course specialization in university: development economics, China (politics, economy, history)
Languages
German (mother tongue)
French (C2)
Spanish (C2)
English (C2)
Chinese- Mandarin (C1)
Italian (A2)
Bosnian/Serbo-Croatian (A1)
Work experiences/ internships
Internship for the OSCE in Sarajevo (Bosnia and Herzegovina) in the Security department (July- September 2009)
Volunteer as an interpreter at the Olympic Games in Beijing (China, July- September 2008)
Part- time Journalist for the newspaper "Bayerische Staatszeitung Muenchen" (Germany, since June 2007)
Catering and Event management in Valencia (Spain, 2006), Toulouse (France, 2007), Internship for the UNESCO in Madrid (Spain, July/August 2005)
Chief Editor of the pupil magazine "AWG- times" (until 2005)
Internship at the "Sparkasse München" (bank, July 2004)
Activities and abilities
Honesty, social commitment, teamwork, critical thinking, highly organized, very good attendance, timekeeping, working attitude and efficiency
Guitar, classical music, traveling, German, French and Spanish literature, contemporary history, philosophy, chess, tennis, beach volleyball, surfing, graphic design
Academic References
Pablo Astorga : professor for international economics ; IBEI/ Oxford University
Martin Shaw: professor for international relations; IBEI University of Sussex
Contact information are available on request
Name Marius Jann
Address Sonnenstr. 7a;
80995 Munich, Germany
Date of Birth 20 February 1986
Nationality German
E-mail Email Removed
Telephone 0043 680 2373935
Education history
Sep 2010- Oct 2011 Master in International Relations at IBEI Barcelona (7.7: notable)
Feb -Jul 2009 Erasmus at Sciences Po Paris
Feb 2007 Political sciences and Sinology at the "Universitaet Wien" (A-)
Jun 2006 "Abitur" at the "Gymnasium Fuerstenfeldbruck München"
Qualifications
"Abitur" with specialised courses in history and German (excellent performance)
Driver's license
Computer: Microsoft Word, Excel, Outlook, PowerPoint, Access
Course specialization in university: development economics, China (politics, economy, history)
Languages
German (mother tongue)
French (C2)
Spanish (C2)
English (C2)
Chinese- Mandarin (C1)
Italian (A2)
Bosnian/Serbo-Croatian (A1)
Work experiences/ internships
Internship for the OSCE in Sarajevo (Bosnia and Herzegovina) in the Security department (July- September 2009)
Volunteer as an interpreter at the Olympic Games in Beijing (China, July- September 2008)
Part- time Journalist for the newspaper "Bayerische Staatszeitung Muenchen" (Germany, since June 2007)
Catering and Event management in Valencia (Spain, 2006), Toulouse (France, 2007), Internship for the UNESCO in Madrid (Spain, July/August 2005)
Chief Editor of the pupil magazine "AWG- times" (until 2005)
Internship at the "Sparkasse München" (bank, July 2004)
Activities and abilities
Honesty, social commitment, teamwork, critical thinking, highly organized, very good attendance, timekeeping, working attitude and efficiency
Guitar, classical music, traveling, German, French and Spanish literature, contemporary history, philosophy, chess, tennis, beach volleyball, surfing, graphic design
Academic References
Pablo Astorga : professor for international economics ; IBEI/ Oxford University
Martin Shaw: professor for international relations; IBEI University of Sussex
Contact information are available on request
Top answer
A lot of what I did here was to add formatting and to try to make the presentation uniform. The rest has to do with wording. These are my suggestions; you may decide on whether to keep these changes or not.
- A lot of what I did here was to add formatting and to try to make the presentation uniform.
- The rest has to do with wording.
- These are my suggestions; you may decide on whether to keep these changes or not.
- Personal data Name: Marius Jann Address: Sonnenstr.
- ] Paris Feb 2007- Political Science and Sinology at the "Universitaet Wien" (A ) June 2006--"Abitur" at the "Gymnasium Fuerstenfeldbruck München" Qualifications "Abitur" with specialised courses in history and German (excellent performance) Automobile driver's license Computer skills: Microsoft Word, Excel, Outlook, PowerPoint, Access University course specialization: developmental economics, China (politics, economy, history) Languages German (mother tongue) French (C2) Spanish (C2) English (C2) Chinese- Mandarin (C1) Italian (A2) Bosnian/Serbo-Croatian (A1) Work experiences/internships Internship for the OSCE in Sarajevo (Bosnia and Herzegovina) in the Security department (July- Sept 2009) Volunteer interpreter at the Olympic Games in Beijing (China, July- Sept 2008) Part- time Journalist for the "Bayerische Staatszeitung Muenchen" newspaper (Germany, since June 2007) Catering and event management in Valencia (Spain, 2006) and Toulouse (France, 2007) Internship for UNESCO in Madrid (Spain, July/August 2005) Chief Editor of the pupil magazine "AWG-times" (until 2005) Internship at the "Sparkasse München" bank (July 2004) Personal abilities and activities Honesty, social commitment, teamwork, critical thinking, highly organized, good attendance record, punctuality, working attitude and efficiency Guitar, classical music, travel, German, French and Spanish literature, contemporary history, philosophy, chess, tennis, beach volleyball, surfing, graphic design Academic References Pablo Astorga: professor for international economics; IBEI/ Oxford University Martin Shaw: professor for international relations; IBEI University of Sussex Contact information is available on request
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A lot of what I did here was to add formatting and to try to make the presentation uniform. The rest has to do with wording. These are my suggestions; you may decide on whether to keep these changes or not.
Personal data
Name: Marius Jann
Address: Sonnenstr. 7a
80995 Munich, Germany
Date of Birth: 20 February 1986
Nationality: German
E-mail (
Personal data
Name: Marius Jann
Address: Sonnenstr. 7a
80995 Munich, Germany
Date of Birth: 20 February 1986
Nationality: German
E-mail (
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