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Perseus Wong Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Could anyone help to check my sentence?

Some findings indicate that conflict of interest in policy making process is the most critical issue the general public concerned.

Some findings show the concern of the general public over conflict of interest in policy making process.
  

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Hello, Perseus—and welcome to English Forums! You can use these: Some findings indicate that conflict of interest in the policy-making process is the most critical issue for the general public. Some findings indicate that conflict of interest in the policy-making process is the most critical concern for the general public.

— Mister Micawber

  • Hello, Perseus—and welcome to English Forums!
  • You can use these: Some findings indicate that conflict of interest in the policy-making process is the most critical issue for the general public.
  • Some findings indicate that conflict of interest in the policy-making process is the most critical concern for the general public.
  • Some findings show the concern of the general public about the conflict of interest in t he policy-making process.
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Hello, Perseus—and welcome to English Forums!

You can use these:

Some findings indicate that conflict of interest in the policy-making process is the most critical issue for the general public.
Some findings indicate that conflict of interest in the policy-making process is the most critical concern for the general public.

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Thank you very much for your help!! and nice to meet you Mister Micawber:)
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