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On this links below I put cover letter. I am not in English so there might be a lot of mistakes, but I don't see it.
http://galaxy.uci.agh.edu.pl/~wies/cl/CL.pdf
or in html
http://galaxy.uci.agh.edu.pl/~wies/cl/CL.htm
Thanks in advance.
MK

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[nq:1]On this links below I put cover letter. I am not in English so there might be a lot of mistakes, but I don't see it. http://galaxy.uci.agh.edu.pl/~wies/cl/CL.pdf or in html http://galaxy.uci.agh.edu.pl/~wies/cl/CL.htm Thanks in advance. MK[/nq]
Why you didn't write the letter here? I think it will be a lot easier to check it. I am not a native, but I have found some of your mistakes.

If I were in your shoes, I wouldn't send the letter like it is now. Sorry to say this.
Irma.

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UÅ¼ytkownik MK napisaÅ?:
[nq:1]On this links below I put cover letter. I am not in English so there might be a lot of mistakes, but I don't see it. http://galaxy.uci.agh.edu.pl/~wies/cl/CL.pdf or in html http://galaxy.uci.agh.edu.pl/~wies/cl/CL.htm Thanks in advance. MK[/nq]
I attach text cover letter below:
Software Deweloper â?? (WKP 56)
I was very interested to see your advertisement on the web site www.topjobs.pl. My friend working in your company informed me too about recruitment so I decided to write motivation letter and send to you.

In my present position as Software Engineer in *** I am responsible for project and programming administration panel of mobile system. I have over 3 years experience in programming web and databases applications, I have solid knowledge from University of Science and Technology in KrakÃ³w and good motivation to work with dedication. I am now seeking to broaden my career. The position of Software Developer with your is exactly what I am looking for and I feel that my experience, enthusiasm and programming skills could be used to good effect by Intertact Company.

I would be very pleased to attend an interview for this position and can be contacted by e-mail or mobile phone at the above address.
Yours sincerely

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[nq:1]U?ytkownik MK napisa?:[/nq]
[nq:2]On this links below I put cover letter. I am ... it. http://galaxy.uci.agh.edu.pl/~wies/cl/CL.pdf or in html http://galaxy.uci.agh.edu.pl/~wies/cl/CL.htm Thanks in advance. MK[/nq]
[nq:1]I attach text cover letter below: Software Deweloper ? (WKP 56)Developer I was very interested to see your advertisement on ... working in your company informed me too about recruitment so I decided to write motivation letter and send to you.[/nq]
(I wouldn't like to start a letter with "I", so I'd put it like this:)

Your advertisement on www.topjobs.pl caught my attention, and I've also been informed, by a friend who is working at your company, that you are recruiting.
(When they get the letter they will know that you have written and sent it to them, so I think you don't need to mention that.)
[nq:1]In my present position as Software Engineer in *** I am responsible for project and programming administration panel of mobile ... for and I feel that my experience, enthusiasm and programming skills could be used to good effect by Intertact Company.[/nq]
(I think this part is quite well done, however I added some articles and minor changes...)
In my present position as a Software Engineer in *** I am responsible for a project and in charge of the programming administration panel of a mobile system. I have more than 3 years experience in programming web and database applications, I have a solid knowledge in my field from my studies at the University of Science and Technology in Krak?w, and a lot of motivation to work with dedication. I am now seeking to broaden my career. The position of a Software Developer with your company is exactly what I am looking for and I feel that my experience, enthusiasm and programming skills could be very useful for Intertact Company.
("used to good effect by Intertact Company." - for this part I couldn't come up with something catchy, maybe someone else can?)
[nq:1]I would be very pleased to attend an interview for this position and can be contacted by e-mail or mobile phone at the above address.[/nq]
(Only minor changes here too...)
I would be very pleased to attend an interview for this position. You can contact me by email or mobile phone. I look forward to hearing from you.
[nq:1]Yours sincerely[/nq]
Hope this helped!
Irma

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U¿ytkownik Irma napisa³:
[nq:1]Hope this helped! Irma[/nq]
Thanks, I am sure that my cover letter will be better!

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