COULD ANYONE HELP ME TO IMPROVE MY ANSWER ?

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What do you think makes you a good candidate?

I'd like to emphasize that I am eager to benefit from this program, and I am confident that this exchange program will help me gain experience, knowledge that would allow me to become much better in the medical field. focused as I am I’ll certainly make the most of this opportunity, study medicine wasn’t easy, and study with an unfamiliar language in a completely different environment is going to be extra harder, but I’m sure I’ll enjoy this process enormously. Also, I am recognized to be a very sociable human being. I’m an active member of our study club, interacting with different kinds of people be a necessary skill and by all this training, now I am quite good at communicating with all kinds of people. Though I have not any experience traveling abroad, I usually lay the foundation of my ability and sharpen my skills by reading a lot and attending different exhibitions from foreign countries to better understand the world. As a self-motivated person, once I set a goal I will strive to achieve it, I’m eager to enrich my knowledge, develop my professional individuality, and experience the student’s life abroad.

As for my interests, I am glad to say that I have dozens of hobbies and activities which I like to do. I have always kept a healthy lifestyle that is reflected in my big love for sports such as gymnastics, running, cycling, hiking, and free diving.