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00could anyone check my Motivation letter for me?I will be glad if you can correct the form and the content( Substance) for me. 02br
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00Here are the content the cover letter should have :02br
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00-a covering letter (mentioning why you are interested in the field or course you apply for, detailing your career goals, etc.)02br
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00 the link to find the brochure about the programme05002br
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00Thank you in advance for your help02br
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00Dear Mr ........,02br
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00i hereby wish to state my interest for a place in your Master Programme on Entrepreneurship and Innovation( Master Professionnel) , a Programme that i found on your webside while looking for such studies.02br
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00My desire to enrol on this special programme reflects my ambition to be independant and my interest in Entrepreneurship.02br
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00I have always dream to have my own business. After my Study in Physics sciences at the University of( Country ) instead of becoming a Teacher i started a business together with a friend. We started with a small budget to produce coconut oil-based Soap in informel Sector.But in the long run i noticed that ideas without knowledge are difficult to be transformed in sustainable projects so i decided to join a privat business College to acquire basic knowledge in Accountancy,Marketing, Finances and sales techniques.My experience in this business has showed me the real role Entrepreneurs can play in developing countries and for me there is no doubt that Entrepreneurship can alleviate poverty by contributing to economic growth and Job creation.02br
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00Since Spring 2004 i have enrolled on the programme Business Mathematics or Mathaematics . I started the courses at the University of .... where i spent one Semester then i moved to University of.......02br
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01b00There are three specific reasons why i want to join a programme on Entrepreneurship02b02br
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00First i noticed once again that whatever i was studying, my desire to fulfil a life long wish deos not quit my mind and is becoming stronger .So i have decided to go for a suitable Master programme which will provide me with the the tools to fulfil my wish.02br
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00Secondly i beleave that great ideas without knowledge are difficulte to be transformed into sustainable projects Therefore learning the process of development and the implementation of new business ideas is very important for me.I think that Entrepreneurship Programme is the most suitable Programme to learn this process fom the idea to the setting up and growth of a company until the eventual withdrawal from the business project02br
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00Thirdly i have some ideas and i want to take part to the actions that aim to alleviate poverty on the african continent and an Entrepreneurship programme will surely help me to select,evaluate and implemente those ideas in oder to create sustainable businesses that will help to alleviate poverty by contributing to economic growth and job creation.02br
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01b00Why this special Programme at the university of( Country) 00?02b02br
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00The location of the university of 00..........00 in the heart of 00Europe00,its international environment,the involvement of an international faculty and a wide network of business community members are factors that will provide me with international skills and experience to anable me 00to compete on the global market These00 are some of raisons why i chose to study Entrepreurship at your Institution02br
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00Another raison is the cours concept:optimal balance between theory and practice is exactly what i am looking for . The fact that i will have practical experience of daily business practice increases my motivation,because the practical part of the programme will show us the difficulties that Entrepreneurs may encounter and will provide us with skills and experiences to deal with obstacles.02br
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00The uniqueness and the duration of your Entrepreneurship curriculum are other factors that lead to chose your institution02br
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00I think your programme is very special because it provides knowledge not only in Eutrepreneurship but also in innovation management.In a global changing world,innovation is very important to create a competitive advantage.02br
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00In Addtion the proramme does not last more than two semesters and this is ideal for me in terms of duration,because i do not wish to join a Master in Entrepreneurship that will last more than three semesters 02br
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00After my study, i will use the knowledge that i will gain to continue to work on our current Jatropha-projet,to help to establish businesspartnership between european and african firms and Entrepreneurs . I also want work together with Lux-Business Academy on an Idea that can help others young Entrepreneurs on the african continent and establish global partnership. 02br
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00I am convinced that Entrepreneuship is one of the way to reduce poverty and your program will surely provide me the suitable knowledge and know how that i need not only to improve our current projects,but also to transform my other ideas into new applications and also help others people.02br
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00Sincerely yours02br
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00My Name02br
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00CV......0250hrefhttp://wwwen.uni.lu/formations/fdef/master_in_entrepreneurship_and_innovation_master_professionnel