Could anyone give me some feedback on my introduction of an IELTS task 2 question?
Question:
Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think are consumers influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them?
My Introduction:
In a race for gaining market shares, many businesses have been recently inplementing a host of advertising campaigns and a variety of advertisements have been created accordingly. This development has both positive and negative effect on consumers and several practical measures could be taken to protect them from problems caused by advertising activities.
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0You need to focus on the essay question and not stray outside its scope.
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