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Chaminda senevirathne Posted 11 years ago
Letter Writing
could anyone correct this please
General Manager,
Head Office,
………………………..
Dear Sir,
Requesting approval for Do you know contest
We have planned to conduct a “Do you know” contest among school marine groups in ..................... District. The tentative budget and work plan are attached herewith for your kind consideration.
Please be kind enough to grant approval for the tentative budget of Do you know contest
Head Office,
………………………..
Dear Sir,
Requesting approval for Do you know contest
We have planned to conduct a “Do you know” contest among school marine groups in ..................... District. The tentative budget and work plan are attached herewith for your kind consideration.
Please be kind enough to grant approval for the tentative budget of Do you know contest
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Welcome to the forum and thanks for registering. The draft of your correspondence appears to be correct. I would suggest that you repeat the quotation marks around the subject contents in both the heading line and the final sentence.
- Welcome to the forum and thanks for registering.
- The draft of your correspondence appears to be correct.
- I would suggest that you repeat the quotation marks around the subject contents in both the heading line and the final sentence.
- ) Subject: Requesting approval for “Do you know” contest Dear Sir, We have planned to conduct a “Do you know” contest among school marine groups in … District.
- The tentative budget and work plan are attached herewith for your kind consideration.
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Welcome to the forum and thanks for registering.
The draft of your correspondence appears to be correct.
I would suggest that you repeat the quotation marks around the subject contents in both the heading line and the final sentence. (Also add a period/full stop at the conclusion of the final sentence.)
Subject: Requesting approval for “Do you know” contest
Dear Sir
The draft of your correspondence appears to be correct.
I would suggest that you repeat the quotation marks around the subject contents in both the heading line and the final sentence. (Also add a period/full stop at the conclusion of the final sentence.)
Subject: Requesting approval for “Do you know” contest
Dear Sir
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