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Lucus Ong Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
Could anyone correct these four sentences for me ?
Hi teachers!
Could you help help me correct these four sentences?
1) Some KTV shops (Shops that provide KTV service) change their menus once in three months.
2) Some busy KTV shops' beverage, were well-mixed when customer orders it, they just have to add ice cubes or something like that, but not have to take time to mix it.
3) Some cafes make mango blended by mango sauce but not real mangoes and do not put any mango cubes as decoration on it.
4) I hope I'll have a cafe chain in the future and I'll named it as Lucrown and make it become a brand just like Starbuck.
Your help will be appreciated.
Could you help help me correct these four sentences?
1) Some KTV shops (Shops that provide KTV service) change their menus once in three months.
2) Some busy KTV shops' beverage, were well-mixed when customer orders it, they just have to add ice cubes or something like that, but not have to take time to mix it.
3) Some cafes make mango blended by mango sauce but not real mangoes and do not put any mango cubes as decoration on it.
4) I hope I'll have a cafe chain in the future and I'll named it as Lucrown and make it become a brand just like Starbuck.
Your help will be appreciated.
Top answer
1) Some KTV shops change their menus only once every three months. 1) Some KTV shops change their menus every three months. 2) Some busy KTV shops' beverage, were well-mixed when customer orders it, they just have to add ice cubes or something like that, but not have to take time to mix it.
- 1) Some KTV shops change their menus only once every three months.
- 1) Some KTV shops change their menus every three months.
- 2) Some busy KTV shops' beverage, were well-mixed when customer orders it, they just have to add ice cubes or something like that, but not have to take time to mix it.
- Even busy KTV shops serve beverages ready-mixed for their customers, who only need to add ice cubes to taste.
- 3) Some cafes make mango blended by mango sauce but not real mangoes and do not put any mango cubes as decoration on it.
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1) Some KTV shops change their menus only once every three months.
1) Some KTV shops change their menus every three months.
2) Some busy KTV shops' beverage, were well-mixed when customer orders it, they just have to add ice cubes or something like that, but not have to take time to mix it.
Even busy KTV shops serve beverages ready-mixed for their customers, who
1) Some KTV shops change their menus every three months.
2) Some busy KTV shops' beverage, were well-mixed when customer orders it, they just have to add ice cubes or something like that, but not have to take time to mix it.
Even busy KTV shops serve beverages ready-mixed for their customers, who
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