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Assman Posted 17 years ago
Letter Writing
Could anyone correct my grammar pls? (13FEB)
Hello everyone, Could someone correct my mistake pls? 
And this one :
Thank you so much!
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Q:
You ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing.
Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the cheque book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the manager what action he will take over this matter.
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Dear Sir,
I am writing to complain about the bad service of your bank. I have ordered a new cheque book form your bank more than two weeks ago but I still haven't receive anything yet.
I remember that I gave a call to your customer service centre to request a cheque at the morning about 11:00; the one who pick up the phone is Ms Shelly. She said that the new cheque will send to my home address by mail directly within 10 days. Ten days later I called the Ms Shelly again and told her that the new cheque book still not arrived, then she said she will follow it and call me back later. But I still haven't receive any cheque book or phone call from anyone of your staff until now.
Please give me an acceptable explanation for this matter. Beside, please let me know how much longer I still have to wait for my cheque book.
Regards
Assman
And this one :
Thank you so much!
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Q:
You ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing.
Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the cheque book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the manager what action he will take over this matter.
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A:
Dear Sir,
I am writing to complain about the bad service of your bank. I have ordered a new cheque book form your bank more than two weeks ago but I still haven't receive anything yet.
I remember that I gave a call to your customer service centre to request a cheque at the morning about 11:00; the one who pick up the phone is Ms Shelly. She said that the new cheque will send to my home address by mail directly within 10 days. Ten days later I called the Ms Shelly again and told her that the new cheque book still not arrived, then she said she will follow it and call me back later. But I still haven't receive any cheque book or phone call from anyone of your staff until now.
Please give me an acceptable explanation for this matter. Beside, please let me know how much longer I still have to wait for my cheque book.
Regards
Assman
Top answer
Dear Sir, I am writing to complain about the bad service of your bank. I have ordered a new cheque book form from your bank more than two weeks ago but I still haven't received anything yet. I remember that I gave a call to your customer service centre to request a cheque book at in the morning about 11:00; the one the person who pick up answered the phone is was Ms Shelly.
- Dear Sir, I am writing to complain about the bad service of your bank.
- I have ordered a new cheque book form from your bank more than two weeks ago but I still haven't received anything yet.
- I remember that I gave a call to your customer service centre to request a cheque book at in the morning about 11:00; the one the person who pick up answered the phone is was Ms Shelly.
- She said that the new cheque will send would be sent to my home address by mail directly within 10 days.
- Ten days later I called the Ms Shelly again and told her that the new cheque book still not arrived hadn't arrived yet, then she said she will follow would check it and call me back later.
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Dear Sir,
I am writing to complain about the bad service of your bank. I have ordered a new cheque bookform from your bank more than two weeks ago but I still haven't received anything yet.
I remember that I gave a call to your customer service centre to request a cheque bookat in the morning about 11:00; the one the person who
I am writing to complain about the bad service of your bank. I have ordered a new cheque book
I remember that I gave a call to your customer service centre to request a cheque book
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Just a few other points:
1. Don't use the past perfect "have ordered." You give a specific time when it happened, so you need to use the simple past. I ordered.
2. Don't refer to the cheque book as "the cheque." Use the full phrase, "cheque book." A "cheque" is a single piece of paper.
3. Using "until now" to me says that you have now received a call. You have already sa
1. Don't use the past perfect "have ordered." You give a specific time when it happened, so you need to use the simple past. I ordered.
2. Don't refer to the cheque book as "the cheque." Use the full phrase, "cheque book." A "cheque" is a single piece of paper.
3. Using "until now" to me says that you have now received a call. You have already sa
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Thank you so much!
Would u pls tell me why I have to use "would" instead of "will" ?
I Just though that it will only made the sentence more polite.
Would u pls tell me why I have to use "would" instead of "will" ?
I Just though that it will only made the sentence more polite.
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Grammar GeekJust a few other points:
1. Don't use the past perfect "have ordered." You give a specific time when it happened, so you need to use the simple past. I ordered.
2. Don't refer to the cheque book as "the cheque." Use the full phrase, "cheque book." A "cheque" is a single piece of paper.
3. Using "until now" to me says that you have now
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AssmanThank you so much for yr advice.Did you receive a call FROM the bank, or di
1) Can I say: I have ordered the cheque book before received the phone call from bank yesterday.
3) That's mean if I am complaining via the phone I can say like this, isn't it?
Can I say " I still haven't received your call in the meantime." ?
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