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Snuppelina Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
Could anyone correct a sentence
Hi there! I can feel that something is wrong with this sentence, but can't think how to improve it:
The above examples of employing nuclear technologies are only a small part of the great potential of nuclear physics for solving the most important problems of modern science and technologies.
Thank you!
The above examples of employing nuclear technologies are only a small part of the great potential of nuclear physics for solving the most important problems of modern science and technologies.
Thank you!
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When revising, you can seldom go wrong by removing unnecessary words and finding meatier ones. Those examples are only a hint of the great potential of nuclear physics for solving the challenges of modern science and technology .
- When revising, you can seldom go wrong by removing unnecessary words and finding meatier ones.
- Those examples are only a hint of the great potential of nuclear physics for solving the challenges of modern science and technology .
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When revising, you can seldom go wrong by removing unnecessary words and finding meatier ones.
Those examples are only a hint of the great potential of nuclear physics for solving the challenges of modern science and technology.
Those examples are only a hint of the great potential of nuclear physics for solving the challenges of modern science and technology.
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Will the next sentence like this one sound ok?
Thus nuclear physics is crucial in science, technology, and production where high technologies are applied (I revised as you advised).
The initial sentence was like this:
Thus almost no field of science, engineering or industry that employs high technologies can now do without nuclear physics methods.
Thus nuclear physics is crucial in science, technology, and production where high technologies are applied (I revised as you advised).
The initial sentence was like this:
Thus almost no field of science, engineering or industry that employs high technologies can now do without nuclear physics methods.
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Yes, much better for clarity and directness, but the last part still seems redundant.
Thus nuclear physics is crucial to science, technology, and cutting-edge production.
Thus nuclear physics is crucial to science, technology, and cutting-edge production.
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