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Chalermkhwan Posted 21 years ago
Letter Writing

Could anyone collect my motivation letter please

Hello, I'm a thai girl. I gonna apply for a position of flight attendant. This is the cover letter I wrote for attach with an online application.

Thank you gays in advance!!Emotion: big smile

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September XX, 2005

Dear Recruitment Manager:



Please consider me as an applicant for the position of Flight Attendant. From my research on your web site, I believe there would be a good fit between my skills and interests and your needs. I feel confident my three years of customer relations experiences along with my optimistic, enthusiastic and positive attitude makes me the ideal candidate to serve XXX’s goal – “XXXXXXXXXX”.

In the university, I made very good use of my time both in studying, and in extra-curriculum activities. I was a Science Summer Camp staff for junior school students and was a treasurer of the Department. I also worked as a high school tutor. In addition, while working toward my master’s degree, I was employed as a retail sale with several shops at XXX Night Bazarr, where most of customers are foreigner. These valuable experiences allowed me to enhance my communication and people skills and also allowed me to meet people of different backgrounds and race.



Working for XXX appeals to me because it has a great reputation and success as the international airlines. Your organization produces a high-quality service, guarantee by the best airline in the world award and more than XX international awards it have been received. Your regarding people as the key for success vision also fascinate me.



The opportunity to work with XXX would be an exciting challenge for me.

I would greatly appreciate an interview and hope to hear from you soon.

Thank you for your consideration.

Sincerely,



My name

Address

Mobile Phone

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Dear Recruitment Manager: Please consider me as an applicant for the position of Flight Attendant. From the information on your web site, I believe there would be a good fit between my skills and interests and your needs. I feel confident that my three years of customer relations experience, along with my optimistic, enthusiastic and positive attitude, makes me an ideal candidate to serve ***’s goal – “***”.

  • Dear Recruitment Manager: Please consider me as an applicant for the position of Flight Attendant.
  • From the information on your web site, I believe there would be a good fit between my skills and interests and your needs.
  • I feel confident that my three years of customer relations experience, along with my optimistic, enthusiastic and positive attitude, makes me an ideal candidate to serve ***’s goal – “***”.
  • At university, I was a Science Summer Camp staff member for junior school students and was a treasurer of the Department.
  • I also worked as a high school tutor.
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Dear Recruitment Manager:

Please consider me as an applicant for the position of Flight Attendant. From the information on your web site, I believe there would be a good fit between my skills and interests and your needs. I feel confident that my three years of customer relations experience, along with my optimistic, enthusiastic and positive attitude, makes me an ideal candidate to
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Thank you very much Mister Micawber.[A]

Actually, I think that the experience in sales can be said as a customer relations experiences.

And I'd like to add more words to indicate my service mind characteristic (in blue).


"At university, I was a Science Summer Camp staff member for junior school students and was a treasurer of the Department. I also worked as
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I was very glad to be able to satisfy these customers.

And bazaar is misspelled, unless the shop owners write it that strange way.


And by the way, welcome to English Forums, Chalermkhwan. I may see you soon: I'm flying to Bangkok in March.

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