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Withpeacel Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

could anyone check this please!

I'm writing my paper now. It's just left two weeks from now to be collected. Actually i've just started it.

here is the acknowledgment and dedication i make, but i'm not sure for that. I need your help please to correct it. Thank you !

Dedication

I dedicate this thesis to my family and friends who are in my hometown, Manado for the never ending love and supports.

Acknowlegment

First and foremost, I would like to give thanks and praise to the Almighty God for His grace and blessings throughout the entire project. Without Him, this is nothing.

During the completion of this thesis, there were many kinds of supports I have got. I would like to express my deepest thanks and gratitude to
- My thesis advisor Yesaya and Dian as the co-advisor, for the valuable guidance, assistance and constructive advice throughout the entire project.
- Dedi Ranafi, for the precious assistance and inspirations in designing and making the mechanical parts of the project.
- Pianggada for sharing knowledge about the mechanical design of wheels at the initial work of my thesis.
- My mother and father in Manado who have taught me many valuable lessons in life and have always gave their best advice. Their encouragement and pray have made stronger to face all the problems in this project.
- My aunt, Jesse who always accompanying me searching all the components and parts needed and being there when I need.
- My only brother Neil in Makassar who has motivated and given me ideas and solutions from the beginning of the thesis proposal until the end of this project.
- My classmates at GS University who are willing to share knowledge about microcontroller programming and this thesis writing, share materials for the project and also support each other.
- All colleagues, staffs and Lectures in GS University, and everyone who has supported the thesis work.
Without all those listed above, this thesis would not have been completed.
  

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Withpeacel I'm writing my paper now. It's just left two weeks from now to be collected. Actually i've just started it.

  • Withpeacel I'm writing my paper now.
  • It's just left two weeks from now to be collected.
  • Actually i've just started it.
  • here is the acknowledgment and dedication i make, but i'm not sure for that.
  • I need your help please to correct it.
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WithpeacelI'm writing my paper now. It's just left two weeks from now to be collected. Actually i've just started it.

here is the acknowledgment and dedication i make, but i'm not sure for that. I need your help please to correct it. Thank you !

Dedication

I dedicate this thesis to my family and friends who are in my hometo
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Thank you very much Mr Proofread for your help. I'm still a lil' bit confused for some sentences. I try to change some of them, i hope all can be nearly correct.
Mr. Proofread
WithpeacelAcknowlegment

First and foremost, I would like to give thanks and praise to the Almighty *** for His grace and blessings throughout the entire
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Acknowlegment

First and foremost, I would like to give thanks and praise to the Almighty *** for His grace and blessings throughout the entire project. Without Him, this was nothing.

During the completion of this thesis, there were many kinds of supports that I gotreceived. I would like to express my deepest thanks and gratitude
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thank you so much feebs11 and Mr. Proofread,.. it's solved now

*** Bless You,!

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