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Coquette Posted 9 years ago
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Could anyone check my sentence please? Is everything correct?
You will be able to kindle a fire, to get food, to raft on a mountain river, to catch fish and to collect herbs. You will be walking on the animal trails and will be sleeping under the starry sky. A guide-aborigine will meet you to lead up the mysterious paths, and a local Shaman will show you how to connect with the world of spirits.
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It is OK, but I tweaked it to make it more natural. You will be able to kindle a fire, get food, raft on a mountain river, catch fish and collect herbs. You will be walking on animal trails and sleeping under the starry sky.
- It is OK, but I tweaked it to make it more natural.
- You will be able to kindle a fire, get food, raft on a mountain river, catch fish and collect herbs.
- You will be walking on animal trails and sleeping under the starry sky.
- A aboriginal guide will meet you to lead you up the mysterious paths, and a local Shaman will show you how to connect with the spirit world.
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It is OK, but I tweaked it to make it more natural.
You will be able to kindle a fire, get food, raft on a mountain river, catch fish and collect herbs. You will be walking on animal trails and sleeping under the starry sky. A aboriginal guide will meet you to lead you up the mysterious paths, and a local Shaman will show you how to connect with the spirit world.
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