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Sarah Ghazal Posted 11 years ago
To whom it may concern,
My name is ___, I have obtained my Bachelor Degree in Computer Systems Engineering major at_____University, I wish to increase my knowledge and skills in an international environment. I believe that I could make significant contributions to my community by participating in the Erasmus Mundus Programme.
“The expert at anything was once a beginner”. In a few years, I can see myself as a creative professional in the technology field. Technology touches almost everything we use; it has created change and continues to create change.
I’m really interested to join HCI (human-computer interaction) master program, where cognitive psychology meets computer science. During my studies, I have found that my interests are focused particularly in the area of computer- based technologies and how they are appealing, usable, and useful for people. My graduation project titled “Web Controlled Robot” had for its purpose to create a robot vehicle for children, an educational toy designed as a way of learning physical computing.
I am a hard working, reliable individual together with being always eager to learn from new colleagues and take on new challenges. I want to gain valuable experiences, insights, and resources that will enhance my career prospects.
With these reasons mentioned I’m giving a try for myself to be part of this top-quality study program. Not only I will have the chance to travel, but also I will practice my spoken English and watch how people live, observe their traditions, spotting similarities and overcoming differences, trying to build long-term relationships that will last for a lifetime. The entire experience abroad will change my life, as a part of a foreign culture and its higher education system. I would be honored if you decide to accept my candidateship to be student at Uppsala University.
Yours Sincerely,
if there's something I can add to make it consistent?
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To whom it may concern,
My name is ___, I have obtained my Bachelor Degree in Computer Systems Engineering major at_____University, I wish to increase my knowledge and skills in an international environment. I believe that I could make significant contributions to my community by participating in the Erasmus Mundus Programme.
“The expert at anything was once a beginner”. In a few years, I can see myself as a creative professional in the technology field. Technology touches almost everything we use; it has created change and continues to create change.
I’m really interested to join HCI (human-computer interaction) master program, where cognitive psychology meets computer science. During my studies, I have found that my interests are focused particularly in the area of computer- based technologies and how they are appealing, usable, and useful for people. My graduation project titled “Web Controlled Robot” had for its purpose to create a robot vehicle for children, an educational toy designed as a way of learning physical computing.
I am a hard working, reliable individual together with being always eager to learn from new colleagues and take on new challenges. I want to gain valuable experiences, insights, and resources that will enhance my career prospects.
With these reasons mentioned I’m giving a try for myself to be part of this top-quality study program. Not only I will have the chance to travel, but also I will practice my spoken English and watch how people live, observe their traditions, spotting similarities and overcoming differences, trying to build long-term relationships that will last for a lifetime. The entire experience abroad will change my life, as a part of a foreign culture and its higher education system. I would be honored if you decide to accept my candidateship to be student at Uppsala University.
Yours Sincerely,
if there's something I can add to make it consistent?
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To whom it may concern, Dear Sir/Madam, My name is ___ , and I have obtained my a b achelo r's d egree in Computer Systems Engineering from major at _____Universit y. I wish to increase improve my knowledge and skills in an international environmen t, and I believe that I could make significant contributions to my community by participating in the Erasmus Mundus Programme. It is said that The an expert at anything in a particular field was once a beginne r.
- To whom it may concern, Dear Sir/Madam, My name is ___ , and I have obtained my a b achelo r's d egree in Computer Systems Engineering from major at _____Universit y.
- I wish to increase improve my knowledge and skills in an international environmen t, and I believe that I could make significant contributions to my community by participating in the Erasmus Mundus Programme.
- It is said that The an expert at anything in a particular field was once a beginne r.
- In a few years, I can see myself as a creative professional in the technology field.
- Technology touches almost everything we use; it has created change and continues to create change.
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Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is ___, and I have
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So many mistakes 
I must not repeat what is already in the CV !
thank you so much for your time
I must not repeat what is already in the CV !
thank you so much for your time
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Sarah GhazalSo many mistakes.Don't worry too much about that. It's not that bad, actually.
Sarah GhazalI must not repeat what is already in the CV !You're expected to talk about your achievements in a letter of motivation, but not to list every item in you CV!
Sarah GhazalThank you so m
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