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Xuteng Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Could anyone check my essay?I'm not confident about me.

Even if I learnt english for many years,my english is still not well enough.So I try to write.But when I want someone english native to tell me where I'm wrong,I got confused.Now I found this forum,I wish there could someone kind-hearted help me point out the mistakes I got in the essay.This will make a great effort in my english learning.Many thanks!

And this is my essay:

[Try to write in English]

Treating english as my second language, I find it difficult to understand some words or sentences.This semester,I got no english classes except one in the tourism college.When I study with those english major students, I feel a little nervous, not because I’m a foreigner, but my english ability is far behind them.Also I know the only studying in class is not enough. I should do more jobs about writting,speaking and listening.

So even my english is not well enough,but I’ll try my best to express what I think and how I feel in english.
The best way of studying a language is trying to think in that language.
Please tell my where I am wrong in my essay. Many thanks!
  

Top answer

Many thanks! Also I know the only that only studying in class is not enough. I should do more jobs about writing , speaking and listening.

— Feebs11

  • Many thanks!
  • Also I know the only that only studying in class is not enough.
  • I should do more jobs about writing , speaking and listening.
  • So even M y E nglish is not good enough ,but I’ll try my best to express what I think and how I feel in E nglish.
  • The best way of studying a language is trying to think in that language.
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XutengEven if I learnt english for many years,my english is still not well enough.So I try to write.But when I want someone english native to tell me where I'm wrong,I got confused.Now I found this forum,I wish there could someone kind-hearted help me point out the mistakes I got in the essay.This will make a great effort in my english learning.Many thanks!

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Thank you so much for checking my essay!

You are patient and helpful!
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Thank you so much!

You are kind and helpful!
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