Could anyone check my essay?

Summer 2014 was really, really great for mer! I really liked how it was, I had so much great times with my new friends! At first I went to England in school of english just alone, but very quickly I found pretty many friends from different countries and after I came back and I went with my mom to Russia. But trip to Russia was not that great compered with trip to England, so that would be better if I will tell you about England.
Like I said before I found many friends from different countries, from England, Iceland, Spain, Italy, Sweden, France and of course from Russia! For me was really great to see people from my country. It was vary funny and amusing with theme, they were really good guys, even if sometimes they behaved very VULGAR, but I knew that it was just their’s mask.
In group from Russia were just two girls and seven boys, they were coming from the same school so they knew each other, and it surprised me because there was none from other countries who came with theirs school.
I met them on third day of my trip, on evening. We had to go on beach and play some games there. That was really funny because none in my group from Iceland did not know how to play volleyball, and of course we lost for group from Spain. But we had very nice time and that was point of that game. In the middle of the game there was some boys from Russia, but they did not know that I’m Russian too. They were standing there and watched how we played, and in that moment was my mom calling me and of course I answered her on Russian! When they heard me speak Russian, they began scream and run to me «She is Russian!!!». That was unexpectedly and I even scared!