Could anybody please correct my cover letter?

0 01table01tr01td02tr02table

02br 02br 02td

01font00Hi there,02font02br
02br
01font00could anybody please correct my cover letter for an application as a camp counsellor at an international summer camp? Although I have learnd English for 9 years at school, my English seems not to be good enough...02font02br
02br
01font00Thank you so much!02font02br
02br
01font00Asrai from Germany02font02br
02br
02br
02br
02br
02br
00Dear Ms XX,02br
02br
02br
02br
00I will be graduating from university with a diploma’s degree in Psychology in May 2006 and am seeking employment opportunities for summer 2006 in the field of childcare. From your web site I learned about your need for camp counsellors for your summer camps in XX, XX and XX, XX00. I am very interested in this position, either in XX or in XX and will be available for the whole summer period.02br
02br
00My work background and coursework have supplied me with many skills and an understanding of dealing with children and adolescents. Because of my special interest in child- and adolescent psychology and -therapy, my main focus at university was on clinical psychology and developmental psychopathy. My diploma thesis contained an experiment with 115 preschool children, so I gained a lot of experience in dealing with children. Furthermore I worked as a student assistant at the Department of Developmental and Educational Psychology. 00 00Besides I gained some additional practical experience in the work with children and adolescents. For example I have had the opportunity to work for more then eight months at the Department of Child and Adolescent Psychiatry at the Clinical Centre XX, where my responsibilities included leading therapeutic group trainings and group activities, conducting diagnostic and therapy sessions, helping with lunches and snacks, and implementing appropriate activities. 02br
02br
02br
02br
00I believe that the combination of my educational and work background and my great pleasure in dealing with children is well-suited to the work at XX. I have enclosed my resume with additional information about my qualifications. 02br
02br
02br
02br
00Thank you for your consideration. I look forward to hearing from you.02br
02br
02br
02br
00Sincerely,02br
02br
02br
02br
00XX02br
02br
02br
02br
00Resume attached as MS Word document 0-