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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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The house is near to a religious building. Relatives reach with patients to the house from morning. The treatment will start in few minutes. When the treatment starts screaming and shouting can be heard outside the house. The treatment ranges from canning to exorcism. Finally the patients will be taken home with tormented souls and bodies. Finally the people lost their patience and complained against the bogus physician and he is behind the bars now.
  

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Anonymous The house is near to a religious building. You don't need the word to. Anonymous and he is behind the bars now.

— Anonymous

  • Anonymous The house is near to a religious building.
  • You don't need the word to.
  • Anonymous and he is behind the bars now.
  • You don't need the word the.
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AnonymousThe house is near to a religious building.
You don't need the word to.
Anonymousand he is behind the bars now.
You don't need the word the.
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