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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Could anybody here help me proofread the following paragraphs?
Could anybody here help me proofread the following paragraphs?
1) Due to anticipated increase in demand for tree maintenance work in upcoming months, which will result in frequent replacement of tools, additional saw chains are necessarily required to meet the needs.
2) I would like to report that as confirmed by Mr. A, the coordinator of the Supplies Department's contractor, over the phone this morning, the Supplies Department decided to begin the installation of a water machine located close to the female changing room on 14.07.2011. I will keep in view of the work's progress and report to you in due course/when the project begins.
3) I write to report that as for the routine anti-mosquito operation, workers from CTR cleaning company went to ABC park to carry out the third anti-mosquito operation yesterday. (The remaining two operation will be held on 18.07.2011 and 01.08.2011) Insecticide was applied and sprinkled at all the flowerbeds within the park and the whole operation lasted for around 3 hours. Besides, the cleaning workers were instructed to thoroughly clean all the manholes and water channels located along the outskirt of ABC park. Please see the attached photos for reference.
Snapshots showing the cleaning company's workers applying insecticide at the flowerbeds within ABC park.
Thank you in advance!
1) Due to anticipated increase in demand for tree maintenance work in upcoming months, which will result in frequent replacement of tools, additional saw chains are necessarily required to meet the needs.
2) I would like to report that as confirmed by Mr. A, the coordinator of the Supplies Department's contractor, over the phone this morning, the Supplies Department decided to begin the installation of a water machine located close to the female changing room on 14.07.2011. I will keep in view of the work's progress and report to you in due course/when the project begins.
3) I write to report that as for the routine anti-mosquito operation, workers from CTR cleaning company went to ABC park to carry out the third anti-mosquito operation yesterday. (The remaining two operation will be held on 18.07.2011 and 01.08.2011) Insecticide was applied and sprinkled at all the flowerbeds within the park and the whole operation lasted for around 3 hours. Besides, the cleaning workers were instructed to thoroughly clean all the manholes and water channels located along the outskirt of ABC park. Please see the attached photos for reference.
Snapshots showing the cleaning company's workers applying insecticide at the flowerbeds within ABC park.
Thank you in advance!
Top answer
) 1) Due to anticipated increase in demand for tree maintenance work in upcoming months which will result in frequent replacement of tools, additional saw chains are neccessarily required to meet the needs. 2) I would like to report that as confirmed by Mr. 2011.
- ) 1) Due to anticipated increase in demand for tree maintenance work in upcoming months which will result in frequent replacement of tools, additional saw chains are neccessarily required to meet the needs.
- 2) I would like to report that as confirmed by Mr.
- 2011.
- I will keep in view of the work's progress and report to you in due course /when the project begins.
- 3) I write to report that as for the routine anti-mosquito operation, workers from CTR cleaning company went to ABC park to carry out the third anti-mosquito operation yesterday.
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Hi, just a little correction to ur write up which I have highlighted red (to be removed) and yellow (suggested as replacement.)
1) Due to anticipated increase in demand for tree maintenance work in upcoming months which will result in frequent replacement of tools, additional saw chains are neccessarily required to meet the needs.
2) I wou
1) Due to anticipated increase in demand for tree maintenance work in upcoming months which will result in frequent replacement of tools, additional saw chains are neccessarily required to meet the needs.
2) I wou
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