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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing

Could anybody help me with this e-mail?

Hello, I want to send this e-mail for a school and I would be grateful if you check it for me, please. Did I repeat the word "if" many times?

Dear Sir or Madam,

I I would like to know if you offer scholarships for international students? If so, I would also appreciate if you send me more information about when and what are the conditions I can apply for it.

Thanks for your attention.
  

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Dear Sir or Madam, Do you offer scholarships for international students? If so, I would appreciate it if you sent me more information about them, such as the requirements, deadlines for applications, the amounts available and and how to apply. Thank you.

  • Dear Sir or Madam, Do you offer scholarships for international students?
  • If so, I would appreciate it if you sent me more information about them, such as the requirements, deadlines for applications, the amounts available and and how to apply.
  • Thank you.
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Dear Sir or Madam,

Do you offer scholarships for international students? If so, I would appreciate it if you sent me more information about them, such as the requirements, deadlines for applications, the amounts available and and how to apply.

Thank you.

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