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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing
Could anybody help me with this e-mail?
Hello, I want to send this e-mail for a school and I would be grateful if you check it for me, please. Did I repeat the word "if" many times?
Dear Sir or Madam,
I I would like to know if you offer scholarships for international students? If so, I would also appreciate if you send me more information about when and what are the conditions I can apply for it.
Thanks for your attention.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I I would like to know if you offer scholarships for international students? If so, I would also appreciate if you send me more information about when and what are the conditions I can apply for it.
Thanks for your attention.
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Dear Sir or Madam, Do you offer scholarships for international students? If so, I would appreciate it if you sent me more information about them, such as the requirements, deadlines for applications, the amounts available and and how to apply. Thank you.
- Dear Sir or Madam, Do you offer scholarships for international students?
- If so, I would appreciate it if you sent me more information about them, such as the requirements, deadlines for applications, the amounts available and and how to apply.
- Thank you.
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Dear Sir or Madam,
Do you offer scholarships for international students? If so, I would appreciate it if you sent me more information about them, such as the requirements, deadlines for applications, the amounts available and and how to apply.
Thank you.
Do you offer scholarships for international students? If so, I would appreciate it if you sent me more information about them, such as the requirements, deadlines for applications, the amounts available and and how to apply.
Thank you.
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