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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Could anybody help me to fix this a bit?
I fear no evils.......I fear no gunman......I fear no internet spy guards neither.
No matter how smart you are, how stupid you are, I just come to chop down your head.
I love to see the moment your head off downed from your body alive.
Like the japs chopped down the chinese heads with Japanese Samurai Sword.
The live body still stuggle....The blood-shed runs, I love the taste of blood shedding.
I am the warrior. Ged ready your head for me, I come to chop your head down any time I like.
To be or not to be, that is not the question. Thats all under my will.
This is a poem I wrote, but I am not confident about the grammer, could anybody retouch it a bit?
thanks.
No matter how smart you are, how stupid you are, I just come to chop down your head.
I love to see the moment your head off downed from your body alive.
Like the japs chopped down the chinese heads with Japanese Samurai Sword.
The live body still stuggle....The blood-shed runs, I love the taste of blood shedding.
I am the warrior. Ged ready your head for me, I come to chop your head down any time I like.
To be or not to be, that is not the question. Thats all under my will.
This is a poem I wrote, but I am not confident about the grammer, could anybody retouch it a bit?
thanks.
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It is really too ugly to touch.
- It is really too ugly to touch.
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Errors :
1 "Neither" should be "either"
2. "Chop down" should be "Chop off"
3. Samurai Sword no "Japanese" required
1 "Neither" should be "either"
2. "Chop down" should be "Chop off"
3. Samurai Sword no "Japanese" required
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