Could anybody correct two sentences for me?

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Could anybody correct two sentences for me?
There are many birds making/building nests above the ceiling of our room.
What a melodious music which is playing / is being played it's!
Many thanks in advance

Mister Micawber · Accepted Answer

There are many birds building nests in the ceiling of our room.
What lovely music is playing / is being played!

Lucus Ong · Answer

Thanks,
However, why can't I use melodious to describe music?

Mister Micawber · Answer

It seems odd. Music is by nature melodious, unless you run into an unusual bit of cacophony, so the word is redundant in a sentence such as yours.

Lucus Ong · Answer

Thanks,
However, what does cacaphony means?
Many thanks in advance

Mister Micawber · Answer

Sorry-- I misspelt it. Try [url=http://www.onelook.com/?w=cacophony&ls=a]CAC OPHONY[/url].

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