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Lucus Ong Posted 17 years ago
Grammar
Could anybody correct this sentence for me?
Jolin Tsai's ability to dance irresistibly leave his concert no vacancies.
*I use simple present tense as I want to express that her concert never have any vacancies.
*I don't know whether it's right to use the phrase "leave his concert no vacancies" to express that all of her concert tickets are sold out .
*I say dance irresistibly to express that her dance is so attractive that we cannot stop ourselves from buying tickets to watch his concert.
Many thanks in advance
*I use simple present tense as I want to express that her concert never have any vacancies.
*I don't know whether it's right to use the phrase "leave his concert no vacancies" to express that all of her concert tickets are sold out .
*I say dance irresistibly to express that her dance is so attractive that we cannot stop ourselves from buying tickets to watch his concert.
Many thanks in advance
Top answer
Lucus's irresistibly good looks make him become the admiration of all the girls in his school. Should it be in his school or of his school. I think both of them are right .
- Lucus's irresistibly good looks make him become the admiration of all the girls in his school.
- Should it be in his school or of his school.
- I think both of them are right .
- Many thanks in advance
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Lucus's irresistibly good looks make him become the admiration of all the girls in his school.
Should it be in his school or of his school.
I think both of them are right .
Many thanks in advance
Should it be in his school or of his school.
I think both of them are right .
Many thanks in advance
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