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Lucus Ong Posted 17 years ago
Grammar
Could anybody correct this article for me
this is what i want to write in the thanksgiving card for my teacher in the thanksgiving week of my school.
so i hope that there are people who help me correct my grammar mistakes and change my expression and words into more standard expression and words.
I feel honour to be asked to write this card , as it give me a chance to express my appreaciation to you .I need apologize to you in advance .As this words maybe gramatically wrong.I appreciate you very much .As I find that all of us have improved superly in English this year.I think you should be the best English teacher that I have ever met.As you teach us the most things .Without your teaching ,i don't think we will be able to handle the unified exam.lastly ,I want to present my truthful thanks to you once again .
so i hope that there are people who help me correct my grammar mistakes and change my expression and words into more standard expression and words.
I feel honour to be asked to write this card , as it give me a chance to express my appreaciation to you .I need apologize to you in advance .As this words maybe gramatically wrong.I appreciate you very much .As I find that all of us have improved superly in English this year.I think you should be the best English teacher that I have ever met.As you teach us the most things .Without your teaching ,i don't think we will be able to handle the unified exam.lastly ,I want to present my truthful thanks to you once again .
Top answer
I need to apologize to you in advance , a s these words may be maybe gramatically wrong. As I find that all of us have improved superly ( superly is not a word) in English this year. As because you teach us the most things .
- I need to apologize to you in advance , a s these words may be maybe gramatically wrong.
- As I find that all of us have improved superly ( superly is not a word) in English this year.
- As because you teach us the most things .
- Without your teaching, I don't think we would will be able to handle the unified exam.
- L astly ,I want to present my truthful thanks to you once again .
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Vctory OngI feel honoured to be asked to write this card , as it gives me a chance to express my appreaciation to you .I need to apologize to you in advance
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In this instance I think it might be a nicer gesture if you wrote the card exactly in your own words. I think your teacher might appreciate that more. What you have written is not perfect English but it makes perfect sense. It would be fine on the card.
That's just my opinion.
One thing I think perhaps you should correct, just to make it look tidier, is your use of spaces around
That's just my opinion.
One thing I think perhaps you should correct, just to make it look tidier, is your use of spaces around
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Mr WordyIn this instance I think it might be a nicer gesture if you wrote the card exactly in your own words. I think your teacher might appreciate that more. What you have written is not perfect English but it makes perfect sense. It would be fine on the card.I agree with Mr. Wordy.
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spelling mistake in :
appreaciation : inncorrect
appreciation: correct
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appreaciation : inncorrect
appreciation: correct
rose73
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