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Lucus Ong Posted 17 years ago
Grammar
Could anybody correct these two sentences for me?
Could anybody correct these two sentences for me?
OPTIMUM:
(1) Good computer gives us the optimum enjoyment of playing Doda.
OPTIMISE
(2) Good computer optimize the enjoyment of playing Doda.
Notice: Doda is the name of a computer game.
I hope to know whether my sentences are right!
Many thanks in advance.
OPTIMUM:
(1) Good computer gives us the optimum enjoyment of playing Doda.
OPTIMISE
(2) Good computer optimize the enjoyment of playing Doda.
Notice: Doda is the name of a computer game.
I hope to know whether my sentences are right!
Many thanks in advance.
Top answer
Could anybody correct these two sentences for me? Many thanks in advance
- Could anybody correct these two sentences for me?
- Many thanks in advance
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Could anybody correct these two sentences for me?
Many thanks in advance
Many thanks in advance
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Hi,
Could anybody correct these two sentences for me?
You need to say 'a good computer'.
OPTIMUM:
(1) A good computer gives us the optimum enjoyment of playing Doda.
Awkward. Better is perhaps this.
A good computer gives us optimum enjoyment when playing Doda.
But it's still not good. eg Does it refer
Could anybody correct these two sentences for me?
You need to say 'a good computer'.
OPTIMUM:
(1) A good computer gives us the optimum enjoyment of playing Doda.
Awkward. Better is perhaps this.
A good computer gives us optimum enjoyment when playing Doda.
But it's still not good. eg Does it refer
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