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Lucus Ong Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Could anybody correct the sentences below for me?

Could anybody correct the sentences below for me?

(1) Every day, I wake up very early to learn English, as I know that no sweet without sweat.

(2) Teacher: No sweet without sweat. So study harder, and then you will have a brighter future.

(3) Lucus: The gymnasts in the Olympics are so great.

Victory: No sweet without sweat. They must have paid a lot of effort.

(4) Everyone knows the fact of no sweet without sweat. However, only a few people really do hard in their life.

(5) No sweet without sweat. The idler you are today, the harder you will be in the future.

(6) No sweet without sweat. The idler you are, the harder you will be.

5 and 6. Which one is better?

Could anybody help me with the sentences above?

Many thanks in advance.
  

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(1) Every day, I get up very early to study English, as I know that there is no sweet without sweat. (This is not an English proverb that I am aware of, however. ) (2) Teacher: No sweet without sweat.

  • (1) Every day, I get up very early to study English, as I know that there is no sweet without sweat.
  • (This is not an English proverb that I am aware of, however.
  • ) (2) Teacher: No sweet without sweat.
  • So study harder, and then you will have a brighter future.
  • (3) Lucus: The gymnasts in the Olympics are so great !
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(1) Every day, I get up very early to study English, as I know that there is no sweet without sweat. (This is not an English proverb that I am aware of, however. 'No pain, no gain' is the English equivalent that I am familiar with.)

(2) Teacher: No sweet without sweat. So study harder, and then you will have a brighter future.

(3) Lucus: The

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