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Lucus Ong Posted 17 years ago
Grammar
Could anybody correct the fiction below for me
I have separated the article below into four posts.If you are too busy, you just need to correct one post for me. Great thanks in advance
After going through the tunnel.We were smallen into the side of dust. They sent me to a place where had much food and numerous of cats then took the cloth away. The black cat stood on a stage and asked me to go to the stage. The black cat appreciated me and wanted me to dance with her.
After the party, they didn't want to send me back. They wanted me to stay there and become their prince."Oh no, I want to go back to my own world."
Really thank you
After going through the tunnel.We were smallen into the side of dust. They sent me to a place where had much food and numerous of cats then took the cloth away. The black cat stood on a stage and asked me to go to the stage. The black cat appreciated me and wanted me to dance with her.
After the party, they didn't want to send me back. They wanted me to stay there and become their prince."Oh no, I want to go back to my own world."
Really thank you
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Separating it just makes it more difficult to understand what is going on.
- Separating it just makes it more difficult to understand what is going on.
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Separating it just makes it more difficult to understand what is going on.
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Separating it just makes it more difficult to understand what is going on.
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