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Gillyflower Posted 6 years ago
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Could anybody check this please?

Hi,

Could you check the following paragraph please?

"This study was conducted on a 2.5-year-old boy with disorders of midbrain. The boy was born at 36 weeks gestation, and was admitted to the neonatal intensive care unit at birth for 10 days, and received hydrocephalus treatment at 2 months of age. The child under study received oral feeding up to 6 months of age. Then feeding was done via nasogastric tube for 3 months due to severe pneumonia, and via PEG tube from 9 months of age till now."

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5-year-old boy with disorders of midbrain disorders . The boy was born at after 36 weeks of gestation, and was admitted to the neonatal intensive care unit at birth for 10 day s. He and received hydrocephalus treatment at 2 month s, of age.

  • 5-year-old boy with disorders of midbrain disorders .
  • The boy was born at after 36 weeks of gestation, and was admitted to the neonatal intensive care unit at birth for 10 day s.
  • He and received hydrocephalus treatment at 2 month s, of age.
  • The child under study received oral feeding and was fed orally up to 6 for the first six month s.
  • of age.
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This study was conducted on a 2.5-year-old boy with disorders of midbrain disorders. The boy was born at after 36 weeks of gestation, and was admitted to the neonatal intensive care unit at birth for 10

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