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Gillyflower Posted 6 years ago
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Could anybody check this paragraph please?

Hi,

Could anybody check this paragraph please?

"However, given the limited number of studies and evidences, and the role of the socioeconomic factors on workers noise annoyance, and the need to protect workers with low socioeconomic status against physical and occupational problems, and to increase organizational efficiencies, this study is designed to investigating the relationship between noise exposure in the workplace and workers' socioeconomic status in an electrical panel manufacturing plant."


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Try to break it up into a few sentences.

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Try to break it up into a few sentences.

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