Could anybody check this letter ? (For IELTS Exam)

I want someone to check this job application letter.

Dear Mrs.Keller,

I am writing to you to apply for the job as a Housekeeper,advertised in "The Wings'' newspaper ,issue of May 15,2012 .

My name is Elijah , I am a Housekeeper , I have more than five years of experience. I have two years experience working at hotels, I worked as a room keeper at The Holiday inn hotel for one year ,and another year I worked at Kempenski hotel . The follow three years I worked as a room keeper in '' United-State" hospital .

I took several courses concern hygiene at hotels, and also a course about how to clean rooms for newly born children.
I have a pleasant personality and good communication skills , moreover ,I can talk four languages such as English,Russian,Ukrainian and Arabic.

If you see that my experience and skills is suitable , please contact me to schedule an interview. My telephone number is 000000.

Looking forward to discussing my credentials with you personally.

Thanks for your time and consideration.

Yours faithfully ,
Elijah