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Mabad Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Could anybody check my sentences.

Although the lecturer said that she felt my nervousness especially in the beginning, her feedback was positive. It was positive because I gave examples of my skills in past scenarios I had experienced and how my current work is relevant to nursing
  

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Although the lecturer said that she felt my nervousness , especially in the beginning, her feedback was positive. It was positive because I gave examples of my skills in past scenarios I had experienced and of how my current work is relevant to nursing .

— Clive

  • Although the lecturer said that she felt my nervousness , especially in the beginning, her feedback was positive.
  • It was positive because I gave examples of my skills in past scenarios I had experienced and of how my current work is relevant to nursing .
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Although the lecturer said that she felt my nervousness, especially in the beginning, her feedback was positive. It was positive because I gave examples of my skills in past scenarios I had experienced and of how my current work is relevant to nursing.
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Thank you Clive! Could you explain why I should include 'of' in the sentence?

Also, in this sentence 'how my current work is relevant to nursing.' At first, I thought it was not correct because somebody told me not to mix present and past tense in a sentence or paragraph.

Thanks again.
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I gave examples of my skills in past scenarios I had experienced and of how my current work is relevant to nursing

I wouldn't say it is essential, but the second 'of' makes it easier for the reader to find your meaning quickly. It makes it clear
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