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Anonymous Posted 21 years ago
Letter Writing

Could anybody check my declaration letter, please!

Hi, can anyone help me to check and correct my followin declaration letter to embassy? Thanks a lot!

Declaration Letter



To the <X-country> Embassy in <Y-location>:



Due to an urgent meeting to attend in <Z-coutnry>, our customer, AAA, has to be available in <Y-location> for meeting preparation from <X-date>. Therefore, he has cancelled his trip plan to X-country and his passport is currently being processed in the embassy for visa cancellation. It is wished that his passport could be made available for pickup from the embassy before <Y-date>.



We hereby declare the above information is true.



<Z-date>



<our company name>
  

Top answer

I'm not familar with declaration letter to embassy; so, I'll assume that you have used the right format. For clarity, I would suggest these changes. === Declaration Letter To the <X-country> Embassy in <Y-location>: Our customer, AAA, canceled his trip to X-country and he has requested X-country visa cancellation from your embassy.

  • I'm not familar with declaration letter to embassy; so, I'll assume that you have used the right format.
  • For clarity, I would suggest these changes.
  • === Declaration Letter To the <X-country> Embassy in <Y-location>: Our customer, AAA, canceled his trip to X-country and he has requested X-country visa cancellation from your embassy.
  • AAA will now attend an urgent meeting in <Y-location>, <Z-country> in <X-date>.
  • For that reason, it is wished that his passport be made available for pickup before <Y-date>.
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I'm not familar with declaration letter to embassy; so, I'll assume that you have used the right format.

For clarity, I would suggest these changes.

===

Declaration Letter

To the <X-country> Embassy in <Y-location>:

Our customer, AAA, canceled his trip to X-country and he has requested X-country visa cancellation from your embassy.

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