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Jaberdene Posted 19 years ago
Letter Writing

Could any one correct and give some advise my letter to UK embassy

Hi All,

I live in UK as student. I got to write a letter to

British Embassy in my country about bring

my wife and son to live with me during my study in UK,



I have drafted a letter collecting few phrases from some posts

of this this forum.



Please correct it and give me some advise for the letter,



Thanks.



Letter is as follows:



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Letter of Invitation

London

05 Aug, 2007.





Dear British Consulate,



My name is John Smith (DOB 21/10/72). I am a highly motivated student

at the Edgware Academy of Languages and Computer Science in London UK

and have been studying here since September 2003. I’m currently in the

first year of a three year Diploma Course in Business Administration

at certificate level. I have been granted leave to remain in the UK

until August 2010 as a student for completing the course.

I have been on holiday twice in my country during my study,

4 weeks in SEP 2004 and 3 weeks in 2005.



I wish with this letter to invite my wife Mrs. Julia Smith (DOB 29/11/71)

and my son Albert Smith (DOB 01/05/95) to live with me in the UK

during my study. They will stay with me at the two bedroom flat

where I live. My wife will support themselves financially without

recourse to public funds during their stay here.

And, I assure you that they will leave the UK at the end of their

permitted stay in UK. I have been obeying UK Immigration Rules and

completely understand that we MUST obey it.





Finally, I will be very grateful if you could grant a visa to my wife

and a son to come and live with me in the UK.





Thank you in advance.



If you require further information please contact me.



Yours Faithfully



. . . . . . . . .

Mr. John Smith

12 Dixon Road

Kingston

Luton

LU12AH

United Kingdom



Tel: 01215XXXXXXX, 0777XXXXXX

Email: Email Removed



P.S. Enclosed documents

1. Notarised photocopy of my passport pages

2. Tenancy Agreement of my accommodation.

3. School confirmation letter of my student status.

4. My visa extension history in UK.

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Some questions:

Q1: Do I have to mention which courses I finished before?

Q2: I extended my visa four times in UK. Do I need to mention them here?

Q2: Whate else do I have to mention in this letter?





Thanks in advance



Mr.John Smith,
  

Top answer

I would suggest that you tell them how your wife will support herself and provide some sort of proof.

— Nona the brit

  • I would suggest that you tell them how your wife will support herself and provide some sort of proof.
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I would suggest that you tell them how your wife will support herself and provide some sort of proof.
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thanks your advise,
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Hi

Nobody helped me.

JE
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JaberdeneHi All,

I live in UK as student. I got to write a letter to

British Embassy in my country about bring

my wife and son to live with me during my study in UK,



I have drafted a letter collecting few phrases from some posts

of this this forum.



Please correct it and give me some advise for th
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Hi

Thank you very very much.

And one more. Could u pls correct following sentence Im going to add to my letter.

" She will be transferring some amount of money into my Natwest bank account before she arrive in UK" .

Question1: Do I have to mention how much money exactly will be transferred? For example 8000 pound.

Question2: Which one is better of "S
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JaberdeneHi

Thank you very very much.

And one more. Could you please correct the following sentence I'm going to add to my letter.

" She will be transferring some amount of money into my Natwest bank account before she arrive
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Dear Jaberdene

I hope you are having good times dude, and i hope that your request will be acceded soon .

Your post has just cought my attention, especially when i read that you are studying and working in the Uk .

It's really important for me to contact you in order to get more information from you .

I hope you could respond as soon as possible to my request.
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Hi,

I am applying for UK Working Holiday Visa. Can you please help me in making Experience Letter or if you could send me a format of Experience letter, it would be a great help for me.

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Thanks

ARK
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Jaberdene
Hi

Thank you very very much.

And one more. Could you please correct the following sentence I'm going to add to my letter.

" She will be transferring some amount of money into my Natwest bank accoun
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