Hi. I'm trying to set a scene... The scene is in an office building...
From its position at the foot of a stairway on the 9th floor a 25-foot Christmas tree rises/reaches/leads/stretches/peeks up to the 10th floor where about 100 people are chatting cheerfully with drinks in hand.
- Could any of the suggested words work here?
- Is the paragraph otherwise well-wrtten?
My evaluation. rises and stretches are best. reaches is pretty good.
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My evaluation.
rises and stretches are best.
reaches is pretty good.
leads isn't making much of an impression on me.
peeks is the worst. It suggests smallness and cuteness where you want something big and maybe even noble.
anonymous Is the paragraph otherwise well-written